Ulysses
gave instructions for starting our motorcycles, using the terms we
learned the night before for all the switches and doohickeys. None of
them looked like they did on the diagram in the workbook. By the time I
actually got mine started, I was ready to throw up. All the other bikes
were growling and snarling. I rolled the throttle like Ulysses told me
to, and the sound actually did bring some reflux up my throat. It was
like being on the back of a bear. A starving bear—a
just-out-of-hibernation bear.
Those words are from my novel The
Reluctant Prophet (David C Cook, 2010). Before that, they
were part of my experience as I sat on the back of a Buell the first
hour of Harley Davidson’s Rider’s Edge class. My instructor’s name
wasn’t Ulysses, but everything else about that paragraph was lifted
straight from that humiliating day. Okay, hour. I counseled myself out
after I fell twice in a sixty-minute period. I didn’t need to be told
that I was a danger to myself and others.
But they let me stay for the
rest of the day to observe and take notes. (May I just go on record and
say that I scored 100 percent on the written exam? I had to save face
somehow.) What I learned filled the pages of Allison Chamberlain’s
story with real stuff. The expressions Harley people use, like “If it’s
only big enough to eat in one sitting, don’t serve to miss it.” The
smells: leather, exhaust fumes, testosterone—seriously, it has an aroma
all its own . . . no wonder I didn’t pass. Most of all, the
possibilities. I could never have thought this up on my own:
“. . . you have to maintain
momentum in order to remain upright. Slowing down is not always the
answer.” I had a feeling she wasn’t just talking about riding a
motorcycle.
Okay, so yeah, I came out of
that research experience with more bruises on my legs than I had plain
skin, and an even more bruised ego. However, most of what I call
“getting some of it on me,” hasn’t been quite that harrowing, and has
definitely left fewer scars.
When the local fire department
suited me up and let me experience a fire in the training tower for Healing
Stones, I was scared spitless, but I was wearing full
firefighter regalia, including a breathing apparatus, and I was
surrounded by professionals. They only messed with me once, when they
handed me the hose so I could get the feel of putting the fire out. Do
you have any idea what kind of kick those things have?
My surfing instructor—for Boyfriends,
Burritos, and an Ocean of Trouble—was adorable enough to make
all the water I swallowed worthwhile. Besides, falling off a surfboard
is a far cry from dumping a Harley.
I loved volunteering with
recovering prostitutes/drug dealers, and although I can’t say I “loved”
watching the debridement of a victim in a burn unit, I felt something
close to the anxiety of a loved one that brought Healing
Waters to life.
That is why I, and many authors
like me, try to get some of it on us when we’re creating a story. That
kind of research does several things to make a piece of fiction
breathe.
First, in the outline stage,
when the plot is struggling to give itself shape, firsthand research
acts like a pair of hands, coaxing it along. After spending weeks in
St. Augustine and volunteering at Thistle Farms (the project that
inspired Sacrament House) and riding hundreds of miles on the back of
my husband’s Harley, the outline for The Reluctant Prophet
took on a life of its own. Even the virtual tour of Allison’s house
that I found on a real estate Website didn’t tell me how her neighbors
were going to complicate her life. I got that from standing in front of
that house until said neighbors came out onto their porches to glare at
me.
The act of immersing yourself in
the fictive dream also heightens the imagery you’re able to use. I had
seen literally thousands of photos of White Sands, New Mexico, but
until I stood on one of her dunes at dawn and let the silence surround
me, I didn’t know it the way it needed to be known for the readers of
Healing Sands to be there as well. It’s the same reason I consume the
food my characters eat. It was a tough job consuming sushi several
times a week while I was writing Motorcycles, Sushi, and One
Strange Book, but somebody had to do it. I think sweet tea
for Healing Waters and sopapillas for Lucy
Doesn’t Wear Pink also qualify as suffering for the Lord.
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Most
important—and here’s where it gets a little woo-woo for some
people—when I’ve come up from my thirtieth spill from a surfboard or
I’m frozen to the marrow from riding on a motorcycle in the middle of
January, those are the times when God whispers the messages to me. I’m
talking about the truths it seems to me God wants woven into the story.
I didn’t think up the poignancy of a homeless man curled up with his
dog beside a Dumpster. God nudged me with that as I drove down, at my
peril, West King Street in St. Augustine. In fact I was given every
spiritual piece of The Reluctant Prophet while I
rode with a carriage tour guide and pumped her for the inside scoop;
when I sat in a meditation circle with recovering
women-from-the-streets and heard myself say that I had issues, too;
even as I limped away from that fallen motorcycle with a case of road
rash I could be proud of.
The bottom line is if your
fiction doesn’t breathe, doesn’t have a pulse and a heartbeat and a
smell all its own, it won’t live on in the reader’s mind and soul. Even
if you aren’t inclined to hop onto a surfboard or a Harley, you can
still give your stories life, as long as you follow what I see as the
minimum requirements.
(1) As writers we have a
responsibility to make fiction as realistic as possible (even in
fantasy, where the world created is its own “real”). The surgeon who
took me on a two-hour tour of the Vanderbilt Burn Center said he did
that so I would “get it right” and not represent burn units as chambers
of horror, which, up close and personal, they clearly are not. I have
used that as my mantra ever since: Get it right.
(2) Get as close as YOU can to
the real thing without undue risk or hindrance to anyone. Note that I
didn’t continue with the motorcycle lessons once I started to fall
apart. Nor did I get out of my car at midnight on West King Street in
St. Augustine and start interviewing hookers. Don’t get too far out of
your comfort zone or you’ll be too freaked out to remember anything
anyway. Do consider the possibilities and perhaps go a step farther
than you normally would.
(3) Approach experts with an
attitude of respect. We aren’t obnoxious reporters, we’re artists. And
if we show an appreciation for what the pros know, it is not only our
books that will benefit. I have grown as a person by learning from a
sculptor, a trial lawyer, an ER nurse, a physical therapist; from
abused women and adults with ADD and ladies struggling with their
weight; from a former Navy SEAL. Okay, so that one’s my husband—don’t
overlook the possibilities right in your own home.
My most vital,
get-some-of-it-on-you research is spiritual. I’m in the trenches with
God daily, journaling, praying, begging, struggling, reading Scripture,
struggling some more, until the answers become part of who I am. Then
they become part of who my characters are. That’s sometimes the most
dangerous research, but it is always the most fulfilling. And it beats
a tumble from a Harley hands down.
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